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[pee1ngdude]

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[Fred]

Quite an ordeal for Chris, but the story had a happy ending. In fact, when two people find they have something special in common, that tends to draw them together. I'm sure they'll go to the movies more often, and I also suspect that there will be more giant sodas consumed.

[pee1ngdude]

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[Wombat48]

Great story and surprise ending as well

[Brian]

I enjoyed the humorous banter and jibes between the guys before the movie started (Joe's excessive food). That was before it all got really interesting!

What a wonderful and special way these two friends got to bond even more closely than they had done before that day.

Maybe you based it on some experience that really happened? Whatever, I really like this story.

[Wombat48]

Yeah would be good perhaps if a mutual pee interest between them developed further??

[pee1ngdude]

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[Brian]

I was considering writing a sequel if there was interest in this story, so I may write more about them and what happens next.

Go for it, I would say. You're a good writer and you'll find an appreciative readership on this site.

[pee1ngdude]

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[BottleBlaze]

I really enjoyed this story thank you!! I always love reading that pattern of a guy needing to help out another guy with a cup/bottle.

And I really enjoyed how you wrote it too